I think that the website for downtown Des Moines is well written. The page does not have any unnecessary words. It gets right to the point with the links telling you to click here if you are hungry, if you want to shop, if you want to live there and ect. The page has a small section showing the most recent news and events. I think the page helps the reader by putting things very simply and briefly. The page is very easy to scan and find what you went there for quickly. Everything is very accessible in one space.
POORLY-WRITTEN :
fixedearth.com
This website is obviously bad. The entire page is centered text. There are multiple colors of text making it hard to read. There are not defined paragraphs or subheads making it hard to scan through the website. There are multiple grammar mistakes. Some of the things that I think are links turn out to just be text. The whole thing is very overwhelming.
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